School Paper

Prompt: Many people argue that it is impossible to create a perfect society because humanity itself is imperfect and any attempt to create such a society leads to the loss of individual freedom and identity. Therefore, they say, it is foolish to even dream about a perfect society. Others, however, disagree and believe not only that such a society is possible but also that humanity should strive to create it.

Topic: Is a perfect society possible or even desirable?

This topic I am writing about today is actually similar to a book I am reading. The book is called Fahrenheit 451. In the book, people live in a world without books, seeming to be in the “perfect” world.

In my opinion, a perfect world is not what I want. Sometimes perfect can be bad because there is no mistakes. Mistakes make people…people. We wouldn’t be human if we were perfect. Humans are made to mess up, because that’s what helps us learn. I think a perfect world would make us more like robots. Mindless, not thinking for ourselves. We would have a code that programmed us to do the same thing over and over again.

You don’t have to be perfect to have a good community. We can be good, even though sometimes we make mistakes. Mistakes are what leads to better people, and not just robots. Another example is the book called Animal Farm. In the beginning, the animals strive to create a perfect paradise where all animals can be equal. This plan goes downhill when the pigs soon realize that they are smarter than the others and make the farm into a place where all the animals slave away and work. The pigs lie to the other animals, and in the end, the pigs are no better than man. This isn’t as good of an example, but it still shows the same idea. People who strive to be perfect sometimes make it worse than it has to be.

In conclusion, having a “perfect” world isn’t realistic and wouldn’t be a good thing even if it was something that I would be able to do, I wouldn’t do it.


“Are you sure about this? It seems…dangerous.” I shouldn’t have agreed to this… too late now. The small creature climbed higher, waiting for a response from its companion. “No, silly, it’s not dangerous…well maybe a bit, but it’s nothing I can’t handle.”

This was the last known sighting of the two friends…and the kingdom hasn’t been the same since. On the day the king and queen lost their son…the land was covered in darkness.


Moon was always told that she was going to be a great queen. She was the future of the kingdom, the great and powerful empress. It was all a great big fantasy in Moon’s head. Stupid. With her father King, they weren’t going to last much longer. That’s why she was going to escape. With Nyx of course. Nyx was Moon’s best friend, and the only person who understood her. Moon and Nyx were going to escape. “I’m sure of it…Oh!” Moon was startled by a sharp knock on the door. “C-come in!” The door creaked open and Nyx peaked her head in. “Hiya! Talking to yourself again?” Moon laughed. “Yeah, just the normal stuff. How did you get in here anyway? I thought Root always stopped you.” Nyx giggled. “That old coot isn’t gonna stop me from seeing you. Do you have the key?” Moon nodded. “Yeah, right here.” She brandished a silver key, and it shined in the light. Both girls looked mesmerized. “Wow…it looks amazing.” Nyx examined the key. “Yep, this is the one. The key to the Far Gate. We’re finally getting out of this kingdom.”

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